Closer to My Heart - Becky Moore Don't be sucked in by the 5star reviews on Amazon, especially the one that compares it to Fifty Shades.

Picked this up for free when I saw several 5 star reviews and was very disappointed. The writing was clumsy and inconsistent to the point where she tells him what happened to her sister when they first meet, but tells the story differently later on. The poor transitions between the characters in the bad dialogue also made it difficult to tell who was speaking to whom at times. The author does manage to attach a brand name and description to everything the characters wear or carry however.

The story line was thin and I found no tension or real sparks between the two. Glad it was free and only took a few hours to read.